ok guys i always like to do my own little rhymes/raps, so here's another one dedicated to the box

boombox or blaster is the word we use, to describe the machines which we daily use, recalling the day when we broke away, from a society much the same as todays! kickin out the bassline fast and hard, on the street, in the house, even in the back yard!
crankin up the volume hard an loud, these boxes was made to please the crowd, thinkin back on the times which was so good, jammin on the corner in your neighbourhood!
aiwa,sharp,sanyo, or jvc, just a few of the boxes that we love to see, the chrome, the lights, the shape size an style, lets save these beauty's from the damn scrap pile!
now i know things change as time goes by, but to lose my love of boxes would surely make me cry
lets all stand together and unite in peace, the value of the box is set to increase, now sit back an chill with your fave box trax, admire in awe, an crank the vol up to the max

not bad...

Funky Fresh

Nice rhyming, enjoyed it

woooord, bro:]

hey BRIGADIER hows things stranger

nice one az

hey Lav,
great poem/rap...i like it...
but it is easier to read it like this:

quote:

Originally posted by LAV LOO:

boombox or blaster is the word we use,
to describe the machines which we daily use,
recalling the day when we broke away,
from a society much the same as todays!

kickin out the bassline fast and hard, on the street, in the house, even in the back yard!

crankin up the volume hard an loud, these boxes was made to please the crowd,
thinkin back on the times which was so good, jammin on the corner in your neighbourhood!

aiwa,sharp,sanyo, or jvc, just a few of the boxes that we love to see,
the chrome, the lights, the shape size an style, lets save these beauty's from the damn scrap pile!

now i know things change as time goes by, but to lose my love of boxes would surely make me cry

(little comment: dont worry Lav, guys like you will keep the culture alive)

lets all stand together and unite in peace, the value of the box is set to increase,
now sit back an chill with your fave box trax,
admire in awe, an crank the vol up to the max

......really cool stuff for a new music track

cheers DAVE
and BLINDDARM, ye it looks way better the way you have layed it out my spelling and thoughts are all there but my presentation is crap, that's what fails me, i was never any good at english
anyway, nice 1 for presenting it for me, you have made it easier to read so it rhymes properly

Yo, Loo. I'm mooving to other place right now, that's why i'm not posting so often here. There's no internet yet ant lot's of work to do . Pics with boxes on the wall at that new place soon! How are u, bro?

hey im all good BRIGADIER thanks for asking look forward to seeing the pics of your set up at your new place all in good time eh, make sure you double wrap them boxes, we don't want to hear of any broken in transit boxes
i hope it all goes nice and smooth for you mate

Thanks, mate Loo, all will be good with them:]. Everytime i'm visiting my old place, i'm taking 1 or 2 boxes with me:].

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Originally posted by dougie:

cheers DOUG

quote:

Originally posted by Brigadier Vytas:
Thanks, mate Loo, all will be good with them:]. Everytime i'm visiting my old place, i'm taking 1 or 2 boxes with me:].

good to hear that BRIGADIER